Poems usually begin with words or phrase which appeal more because of their
sound than their meaning, and the movement and phrasing of a poem. Every poem
has a texture of sound, which is at least as important as the meaning behind the
poem. Rhythm, being the regular recurrence of sound, is at the heart of all
natural phenomena: the beating of a heart, the lapping of waves against the
shore, the croaking of frogs on a summer’s night, the whisper of wheat swaying
in the wind. Rhythm and sound and arrangement –the formal properties of
words—allow the poet to get beyond, or beneath the surface of a poem. Both
Gwendolyn Brooks’ “Sadie and Maud” (799) and Anne Bradstreet’s “To My
Dear and Loving Husband” (784) emphasize poetic sound to express their themes.
Used to enhance sound in a poem, alliteration is the repetition of sound in
consecutive or neighboring words, usually at the beginning of words. Both Brooks
and Bradstreet make use of alliteration in their poems. “Sadie stayed at home.
/ Sadie scraped life…” (2-3) the repetition of s is evident in these two
lines, reflecting the sassiness and independence that Sadie possessed. “Then
while we live, in love lets [persevere]” (11) the slow musical repetition of
the l sounds reflect the romantic emphasis in the poem. Assonance—the
repetition of the same or similar vowel sound, especially in stressed
syllables—can also enrich a poem. Assonance can be used to unify a poem as in
Bradstreet’s poem in which it emphasizes the thematic connection among words
and unifies the poem’s ideas of the husband and wife becoming one. “Compare
with me ye woman if you can” (4). In Brook’s poem, repeated vowel sounds
extend throughout. Brooks indirectly links certain words and by connecting these
words, she calls attention to the imagery that helps communicate the poems theme
of how different two people who grew up in the same household can be. “Under
her maiden name/ Maud and Ma and Papa…” (10-11). In addition to alliteration
and assonance, poets create sound patterns with rhyme. The conventional way to
describe a poem’s rhyme scheme is to chart rhyming words that appear at the
ends of lines. In Brooks’ poem the rhyme scheme is abcb, defe which reinforces
the way two things can begin the same, but change as time goes on. Naturally,
rhyme does not have to be subtle to enrich a poem. An obvious rhyme scheme like
the one in Bradstreet’s poem is aabb, ccdd can communicate meaning by forcing
attention on a relationship between two people that are not normally linked. The
poem’s theme speaks of the husband and wife becoming one, the poem’s rhyme
scheme is of two consecutive lines belonging together and having one sound.
Rhyme can also be classified according to the position of the rhyming syllables
in a line of verse. Bradstreet’s poem contains beginning rhyme, Brooks’
poem, on the other hand, contains only end rhyme. “I prize thy love more than
whole mines of gold/ My love is such that rivers cannot quench/ Thy love is such
I can in no way repay”(5, 7, 9). “Her girls struck out from home/ Her
fine-tooth comb” (14, 16). Poets, too, create rhyme by using repeated words
and phrases. “Sadie scraped life/ with a fine-toothed comb” (3-4) and
“Sadie had left as heritage/ her fine-tooth comb” (15-16). The repeated
phrases “Sadie” and “Maud”, which shift from one subject to the other
and back again “Maud went to college/ Sadie stayed at home” (1-2). The poem
has a singing rhythm that resembles a song that children play to. The
remembrance of carefree childhood ironically contrasts with the adulthood that
both Sadie and Maud now face as they grow up: Sadie stays home and has two
children out of wedlock; Maud goes to college and ends up “a thin brown
mouse”. Repeated phrases in Bradstreet’s poem include “if ever” and
“love”. “If ever two were one then surely we. / If ever man were loved by
wife then thee” (1-2). “My Love is such that rivers cannot quench, / Nor
ought but love from the give recompence” (9-10). With such recurrence, the
poem is like a slow romantic song and the repeated words are its rhythm. Meter,
the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables that govern a poem’s lines,
largely creates poetic rhythm. This gives readers the “beat” of the poem and
approximates the sound of spoken language. The meter of Bradstreet’s poem is
iambic pentameter and it is evident throughout the poem. It contributes to the
overall effect of the poem because all of the words about one, we, thee, are
stressed or emphasized; thus reinforcing the theme of the poem. The meter of
Brooks’ poem is anapestic dimeter, it contributes to the overall theme of the
poem like the comparison of the sisters, every other stanza is alike. A way of
varying meter is to introduce a pause in the rhythm often created by a
caesura--a “cutting” within a line. Both Brooks and Bradstreet use caesuras
to complete individual thought and to add to the beat of the poem. Although the
end of a line may mark the end of a metrical unit, it does not always coincide
with the end of a sentence. Poets may choose to indicate a pause at this point,
or they ma continue, without a break, to the next line. Both Brooks and
Bradstreet use end-stopped lines—lines that have distinct pauses at the end.
“Thy love is such that I can in no way repay, / The heavens reward thee
manifold I pray.” (8-9). “When Sadie said her last so long/ Her girls struck
out from home.” (13-14). These lines give he poem a more sharp, abrupt effect
like the lines in a song. With sound and rhythm being at the heart of our
everyday lives, we begin not to notice how much of an effect it has on us.
It’s in the beating of a heart, the movement of rush-hour traffic, and in the
way we walk. With this, what often attracts us to poetry is its sound and
movement. Poets use sound to express the themes of their poems and it allows
them to find a deeper meaning behind the poem. Both Brooks’ and Bradstreet
made rhythm and sound evident in conveying the themes of their poems.